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Saturday, 10 December 2011

100 Words: Lust

I simply cannot help myself. Have you seen her? She is irresistible.

I know she toyed with me at first, twirling my tie and leaning just a fraction too close; close enough to smell her scent. She intoxicates me and I will buy her anything she wants just to get what I want.

Every time I see her I take everything from her so I can really see her; no silk or satin or lace, just skin. Then I take my time, trying to make the pleasure last. I’d see her every day if I could. Just to do that.

11 comments:

Joe Pereira said...

Clever. A woman writing the intimate thoughts of a man and getting it right :)

Sharon Longworth said...

A very fine end to a cracking series of pieces. Well crafted and thought-provoking; really well done.

Nessa Roo said...

Excellent. I had wondered how you would handle LUST. Nicely done!

Peter said...

So, you reached the seventh! Too bad - and I don't agree - that it's considered as a deadly sin!! :-)

Romina Garcia said...

How you could get me there in only 100 words is inspiring!

Pufnstuf said...

These have been so enjoyable and well written - it's kind of a shame that there's only seven deadly sins!

Doria said...

Nicely done! :)

Cyndi said...

I love this. I love your 100 words idea. Keep 'em coming! :)

T. Roger Thomas said...

"She intoxicates me and I will buy her anything she wants just to get what I want."

Go on

icyhighs said...

This actually happens? Women lean in and twirl men's ties? Must be true if a woman writes it. Now I'm depressed.

Karoline Lucas said...

Don't we all struggle with some form of Lust in our lives? Nicely written.