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Thursday, 8 December 2011

100 Words: Wrath

He doesn’t do anything. Twenty years I’ve looked after him and still it goes on; food wrappers, cigarette butts and dirty cups at a time when I should be relaxing.

I told him that yesterday and he just looked at me like I was a piece of shit on his shoe.

I know I’ll have to call someone to sort it out but right now I need five minutes to compose myself.

I cried at first. Then I screamed; screamed at myself when I realised what I’d done.

I’ve left the pillow over his face. I can’t bear to look.

5 comments:

Rachel Handley said...

Wonderful writing, I love how, despite the word count, the change in narrative is still rather jolting.

Sydneylk said...

Goodness gracious...
That was brutal...

Let's hope this never happens to Mr. Manbag.
;)

Gia said...

Ha! First time I've visited your blog and I just read that post and went "WTF WTF WTF DO I NEED TO CALL THE AUTHORITIES?!?" But then I looked at the tags and calmed down.

Creepy. Nice job.

Doria said...

bwhahahah... Thats awesome!!!

Karoline Lucas said...

Is that my husband you're talking about? LOL!